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magic by Beatrycze1987 magic by Beatrycze1987
It is my idea for Zatanna's suit.
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Trigar Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
Pencil Club Mentor Critique:

You have a nice piece here! I love your cross hatching shading work! Cross hatching can be so tricking sometimes and turn out horrible if you don't do it just right, but you seem to have gotten a nice flow going for you here in this piece!

As I look at this piece, I see you have a nice handle on proportions and movement! That's half the battle!

Looking at this piece with a critical eye, the biggest thing that stands out that needs some slight improvements would be her top hat and her arms from the elbow to the wrists.

First the top hat; it needs just a slight size adjustment bigger so that it would theoretically fit her head. The size it is now she would barely be able to get it on because the hat's opening is smaller than the size of her head. (it's a mistake I use to make as well ;))

And her arms, they're great, but her right (viewer's left) forearm is longer than than her other one. That top hat might have confused your eye a bit on the length of the arms, but if you were to put your own arms in that position (check it out in a mirror) you'll notice that her left arm (viewer's right) should be reaching higher than the bent arm because it's straight and doesn't lose its height by being bent.

Aside from that, really nice piece! Hope this helps you out in some way:)
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Beatrycze1987 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2010
Thanks for the comment :)
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Trigar Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2010  Professional Traditional Artist
My pleasure:D
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shaun-hume Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010
This is great! Are you going to colour at any point? :)
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Beatrycze1987 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010
Thanks. I don't think about colour. But after your note pherhaps I do that:) I'm glad that you like this work :)
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shaun-hume Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010
No problem, it's insanely good, you should be proud! :D
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Beatrycze1987 Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010
Thanks:)I'm invite to see my another works.
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Beatrycze1987 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010
:)....... I'm glad that you like a shorts.
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Griffingirl Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2010
I want those shorts.
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shaun-hume Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2010
I swear my girlfriend has a pair of these, with the 4 buttons and all O_O

Jay Jay's fashion department has probably been looking at DeviantArt for ideas, heh
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